Boomtown Memory -

[Pentagram]

Boomtown Memory

Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.

Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.

I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.

Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.

Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

[General Zod]

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

I could use some reads and reviews here folks...….

Just sayin...…..

[Hieronymous Corey]

Okay.

[G***@none.i2p]

Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 10:11

Okay.

Okay what, Pastor Corey.....?

[Hieronymous Corey]

Just okay. That's all. Okay?

[Z***@none.i2p]

Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 15:52

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Just okay. That's all. Okay?

Just another troll post, Pastor Corey....?

[Hieronymous Corey]

Okay. Whatever you say. LOL

[Z***@none.i2p]

Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 16:56

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Okay. Whatever you say. LOL

Why are you trolling in my poem thread, Pastor Corey....?

[Hieronymous Corey]

I said it was okay. What more do you want? LOL

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
I said it was okay. What more do you want? LOL

Probably someone who reads and comments on his poem, which you don't seem capable of, Pastor Corey.

;)

[Hieronymous Corey]

Probably? LOL. Okay.

[Z***@none.i2p]

Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 17:10

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Probably? LOL. Okay.

Why are you trolling my poetry thread...?

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Probably? LOL. Okay.

Yes, probably.

;)

[Conley Brothers]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Hieronymous Corey
I said it was okay. What more do you want? LOL

Probably someone who reads and comments on his poem, which you don't seem capable of, Pastor Corey.
;)

The best you have ever offered as critique was "interesting". The best Sulzbach has offered was "Outdamnstanding". Why are you two cry babies sniveling?

[General Zod]

Okay.

Thanks P.C.

[Coco DeSockmonkey]

Post by General Zod

Okay.

Thanks P.C.

Worthless post #13 for today.

[General Zod]

Post by Coco DeSockmonkey

Post by General Zod

Okay.

Thanks P.C.

Worthless post

You are correct, Pendragon... your posts are worthless... this is #10,798 from you....

[i***@gmail.com]

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

Excellent.

[Will Dockery]

Post by i***@gmail.com

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

Excellent.

"Agreed and seconded," as the saying goes.

;)

[G***@none.i2p]

Will Dockery wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 07:46

Post by Will Dockery

Post by i***@gmail.com

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

Excellent.

"Agreed and seconded," as the saying goes.
;)

I thank thee, Sir Doc.......

[Bodeen]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by i***@gmail.com

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

Excellent.

"Agreed and seconded," as the saying goes.
;)

Ha ha ha...

[G***@none.i2p]

ibshambat wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 05:11

Post by i***@gmail.com

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

Excellent.

I thank you ibshambat..........

[Z***@none.i2p]

ibshambat wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 05:11

Post by i***@gmail.com

Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.

Excellent.

My last reply to you has been buried by Corey's troll posts, so... thanks again, Ilya S.

[Z***@none.i2p]

OK...