Hen Hanna
2018-07-28 17:32:36 UTC
Apparently, in creative writing courses (fiction and non-fiction), one of the first things they tell you is to stop using [Very] and [Suddenly] and other [-ly] adverbs.
Really? Seriously?
... but lately and Suddenly, i found myself starting to think about [Suddenly] frequently -- Should i avoid them? and HOW can i avoid them?
Is there anyone else here who's thought about [Suddenly] or similar issues ?
<------- Isn't that a boring cliche, Anton?
In English translations, your stories are much more boring than Maupassant's.
Let the sentence or the action itself jar the reader into feeling the suddenness of the action. “Suddenly” ironically slows down the action and delays the actual suddenness of the sentence. Tit for the word, either. Just don't use it. Let the silence speak for itself to convey your message.
------- Do i spot an [ironically] which is way-overused by bad writers and dull minds ?
Really? Seriously?
... but lately and Suddenly, i found myself starting to think about [Suddenly] frequently -- Should i avoid them? and HOW can i avoid them?
Is there anyone else here who's thought about [Suddenly] or similar issues ?
“Sudden” or “Suddenly” is another practically useless word.
Anton Chekhov once said “Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.”<------- Isn't that a boring cliche, Anton?
In English translations, your stories are much more boring than Maupassant's.
Let the sentence or the action itself jar the reader into feeling the suddenness of the action. “Suddenly” ironically slows down the action and delays the actual suddenness of the sentence. Tit for the word, either. Just don't use it. Let the silence speak for itself to convey your message.
------- Do i spot an [ironically] which is way-overused by bad writers and dull minds ?