Yurui Liu
2020-02-15 02:46:35 UTC
Hi,
Which of the following is better style?
1. He eventually recovered, albeit with severe brain damage, his
intelligence having dropped to the level of a six-year-old.
2. He eventually recovered, though with severe brain damage; his
intelligence had dropped to the level of a six-year-old.
I'd appreciate your help.
Which of the following is better style?
1. He eventually recovered, albeit with severe brain damage, his
intelligence having dropped to the level of a six-year-old.
2. He eventually recovered, though with severe brain damage; his
intelligence had dropped to the level of a six-year-old.
I'd appreciate your help.